unanswered prayers are hard if we hold on to them too tightly you know...there is reason to everything....winters breath is a cool though, no pun intended...smiles.
i like how you connect the image of winter breath with the prayers, even if they stay unanswered, they make their way through the cold..a bit of sadness in this but hope shines through as well
unanswered prayers are hard if we hold on to them too tightly you know...there is reason to everything....winters breath is a cool though, no pun intended...smiles.
ReplyDeleteThis is so beautiful...frozen tears.
ReplyDeleteI like the pairing of the words and photo.
ReplyDeletei like how you connect the image of winter breath with the prayers, even if they stay unanswered, they make their way through the cold..a bit of sadness in this but hope shines through as well
ReplyDeleteOh very sad - I hope they do get answered at some point - I can certain picture them vividly from your poem. k.
ReplyDeleteSo sad. Unanswered prayers as frozen breaths...great imagery. But I do hope the prayers get answered someday. Maybe in Spring? :D
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poetry, Patricia. And the photo is wonderful!
ReplyDeletecool pic and words to go with... lovely write
ReplyDeleteFelt like (instead of the dark night of the soul) the cold winter of the soul. Nice, concise write, Patricia.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem, Pat.
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