tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8761501073790227558.post7262790235890964639..comments2023-04-15T05:13:03.656-04:00Comments on Lovepats: Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8761501073790227558.post-81828508602083710172011-06-23T14:47:08.821-04:002011-06-23T14:47:08.821-04:00i love how evokative smell can be, Wood smells are...i love how evokative smell can be, Wood smells are precious to me, they make me think of my carpenter daddy. :] lovely poem. xxxxAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8761501073790227558.post-50437580901974627452011-06-21T10:37:11.035-04:002011-06-21T10:37:11.035-04:00Oh I love the flow of this!
"lay over me
You...Oh I love the flow of this!<br /><br />"lay over me<br />Your midnight sky<br />glorious covering of stars<br />water lapping underneath<br />tucking in my soul<br />with heartbeats<br />of gentle wave"<br /><br />and I so love the peace in these lines.Raivennehttp://wp.me/pPury-eMnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8761501073790227558.post-74358194176612055172011-06-21T02:55:02.057-04:002011-06-21T02:55:02.057-04:00touching memories,it's always reviving, you li...touching memories,it's always reviving, you lived your memories again with the words you poured with the post.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8761501073790227558.post-23550349641637434012011-06-20T21:37:13.433-04:002011-06-20T21:37:13.433-04:00I love this line "lay over me/Your midnight s...I love this line "lay over me/Your midnight sky". This piece is beautiful and soothing, like a lullaby.Annahttp://waysidewordgarden.wordpress.com/2011/06/20/fiery-rings/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8761501073790227558.post-11467121113463572532011-06-20T20:23:09.014-04:002011-06-20T20:23:09.014-04:00I think it's lovely. I especially like the hea...I think it's lovely. I especially like the heartbeat waves. :-)Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8761501073790227558.post-51956541239244551722011-06-20T15:55:56.190-04:002011-06-20T15:55:56.190-04:00Beautiful...the rhythm is lyrical. Lovely piece.Beautiful...the rhythm is lyrical. Lovely piece.brenda whttp://undercaws.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8761501073790227558.post-79171250854551655472011-06-20T15:29:31.607-04:002011-06-20T15:29:31.607-04:00They say scent is our strongest link to memories. ...They say scent is our strongest link to memories. Thanks for sharing yours.Randy Behaviorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17221025801740967490noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8761501073790227558.post-72225710587563170882011-06-20T12:38:17.624-04:002011-06-20T12:38:17.624-04:00As Brian said, this is an evocative piece full of ...As Brian said, this is an evocative piece full of music and the reassurance one gets lying between the water and the moon. It's a song of summer, of joy, of youth, of remembrance, of the song of loons, and that special feeling the East Coast US gives you that is unique and personal. Beautiful.<br />GayBeachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8761501073790227558.post-3993451399076485042011-06-20T11:12:25.743-04:002011-06-20T11:12:25.743-04:00This is a beautiful piece. Different... I can'...This is a beautiful piece. Different... I can't put my finger on why. To think that wet wood could stir so many emotions.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8761501073790227558.post-73840920594877309332011-06-20T09:52:23.187-04:002011-06-20T09:52:23.187-04:00ah, smells evoke such thoughts in me..returning th...ah, smells evoke such thoughts in me..returning the praise, i like...smiles.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8761501073790227558.post-30229038577928391902011-06-20T09:52:17.534-04:002011-06-20T09:52:17.534-04:00Beautiful cadence to your poem Patricia - I think ...Beautiful cadence to your poem Patricia - I think this is one of the important things with free verse to make it poetry versus prose - the descriptives but also the rhythm - leave out the rhyme but I think the rhythm is still needed - lovely :) SteveAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com